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Yet another poem, titled “The Twilight.” I don’t think it’s nearly as good as some other stuff I’ve written, but I had to write it, simply because of the first stanza. So, to give credit where credit is due, the brilliant Edith Wharton devised the first stanza herself in the novel Summer.
The Twilight
In the clear light that is all shadow,
Fields and woods were outlined with an unreal precision;
Then the twilight blotted them out,
And the little house turned grey and spectral
Under its wizened apple branches.
In the deep shadow that is all but invisible,
Outlines cease to exist, and precision becomes less;
Then the dawn outshone them all,
And the little invisible lines came into view
With the wizened man’s truth.
In the roaring flames submerged in the sea,
Treasure and waste lay side by side without worry;
Then man came to clean them out,
And the little treasure guardian turned fearful and dismal
After it lost its pearl.
In the sanctity and safety that knows no protection,
One small line stands alone with an unreal precision;
Then, like the death of life, it was overtaken,
And the little line turned smaller and more invisible
Next to the twilight.






Back to back poems. I could get used to this. ;)
Twas great Jay. And I can see why you used that as the first stanza. It is very deep.
Hey.
What exactly is this poem about? Because all I can really see is random descriptions of things, and I want to give you the benifit of the doubr and hope you didn’t just put don’t a bunch of random stuff.